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A girl in our school committed suicide 8 days before the end of the school year. Everyone went to her funeral. But when we got back to school, the other girls just continued saying things like;

"She was useless anyway."
"and ugly too."
"She probably just wanted attention, but she took it too far."
"Leave it to her to make that mistake, she was a stupid slut in life, and she's still one in death."

I couldn't take hearing that, so I took the guys (Because I'd rather hang out with all boys than hang out with bitched like that.) and we walked down to the office, refusing to go back to our classroom until those girls got their punishment for saying such harsh and cruel things.

What's worse is I knew the girl, she was one of the only girls I hung out with, and it was only because she was a nice, and truly honest girl. She was far better than those hoes at our school will ever be, but they drove her to that. They're supposed to be women, but the have no compassion, or love for anyone. No matter how sad the story, they were never swayed.

I found out one of the girls payed her older brother and his friends to beat her, the boys went farther than that, and I'm guessing that's what pushed her off the edge. Those grls were expelled, they won't be allowed back into our school, the older brother and his friends were all in college, and this girl was only fourteen, so along with being kicked from their schools, they're facing criminal charges for the rape of a minor.

I cried at her funeral, I smiled when justice was served, and I did my best to make sure the boys and girls got what was coming to them. But one thing I did wrong, the one thing I'll always regret, is that I wasn't there for her, and even though I also went through this once, I didn't recognize it in her. When she faked a smile, I knew it was fake, but I went along with it, I didn't think she wanted to talk about it, I should've made her, I should've done all I could to help her, but I didn't. And for that, I'll never forgive myself.

~ Stevey.
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PlatinaStar Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy damned fuck. That's horrible! How can they be so cruel to a poor girl?

I hope she rests in peace.
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RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
They...hold on dafuq?
God, what is this world coming to? It makes me ashamed to be female. The poor girl who died should have a special place in the Afterlife, while those bitches and the assholes burn. Painfully.

I mean paying her own BROTHER to assult her? There's a special place in hell for them for paying, and him for accepting.
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zepIyn Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
And then raping her :U I mean, it's bad enough raping someone. It's really bad raping a 14 year old. It's just disgusting and revoulting to rape a 14 year old relative... and not even be asked to.
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RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Probably a mentally messed up pervert...there are people who are *ahem*, attracted, to their own siblings, and it must have been either a "DUDE, THAT'S BRILLIANT!" moment, or a "Well, oppurtunities are oppurtunities" moment.

It's nice, maybe not circumstancially (is that a word?) to see someone with a smilar viewpoint. Reminds me of Amanda Todd's situation. She messed up. She didn't deserve the shit she went through, nobody who takes their own life does.

I ramble, so sorry if that was confusing.
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zepIyn Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It's okay <3 Yeah, I watched the Amanda Todd video. One mistake = people causing her to die. I mean, seriously. The man who shared her photos;; what if she got a photo of his you-know-what and shared it all over the internet? He wouldn't be the happiest man alive.
Yeah, he's not really a brother if he did that. Heck, he even accepted the money. Then chose to rape her!
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RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
humanity is sad, isn't it?
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zepIyn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
very.
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RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
nice talking to you

despite the sadness of this post anyways
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BlueCrystalTiger Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i have no friends and i dont wana go back to school evry one hates me because im difrit o ritin 10 suicide notes and hide them i dont know wat to do
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
I swear, girls are getting worse and worse every year. I'm glad those bitches got their comeuppance. Now hopefully they'll think twice before they make such nasty remarks about someone - especially someone who's been pushed to the point of suicide.
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TheArtisticOtaku Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This made me cry, I'm so repulsed by those girls. I can't stand the fact that such horrible people exist.
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IsThisWorthIt15 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:noes: they paid her brother to rape her?
he isnt her brother, thats sickening
and hun you cant help if you dont know, she probably tried coping on her own
she wasnt angry to you or she'd have said, atleast you were still her friend when they wernt :heart:
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zepIyn Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nope. They paid her brother to beat her. That dumb prick chose to rape her.
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IsThisWorthIt15 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
D: but why would they pay to do that? and -_- some people are just evil
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zepIyn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
They just wanted to be bullies... even though it would get them nothing, just a fine / jail.
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IsThisWorthIt15 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
D: thats stupid though :/
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SallyDollop Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
what an awful story im so sorry for you. my story isnt quite like your or hers but it is similar im at the edge and im looking for something to hang on to but i cant find anything. writing or drawing used to be my release but now not even that works anymore. i dont want to hurt anyone and i wont by leaving this world early. i cant trust anyone with this, but strangers are ok cuz you dont know me and you cant convince me otherwise
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orfea168 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
It's very sad story. My story is similar as her. But I life only for my mum. When I want to commit suicide I thought about her. And I don't want to met my tormentors in the hell. Someday I wrote in my diary that I will kill them. I wrot every step I will take: flay, broke the bones, cut nose, hands, fingers and many other cruel things. When my mum found this she was verry scared.
Remember, nobody when feel really sick will told you about this.
Because people like me and her don't believe anyone.
I know anybody can help me. If I only get gun I will kill my classmates, people which afflicted me by many years. I know I will get to heaven so I can kill them only in my dreams. it's so sad.

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Sorry for my Eanglish.
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Husky-21 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Why do cruel people like them still exist
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xReicheru-chanx Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student General Artist
When I hear stories like this, I mentally look up to the heavens and scream WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!

Drdfhrueihsg...

If anyone deserves the death penalty, it would be those who drive others to their deaths and feel not even a HINT of remorse...

How anyone could consciously tear a person, a GOOD person, down from the inside and then beat on their memory once they're gone is beyond me.
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xdemonicxkittyx Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can kinda understand this,but at least you are still there for her,and didnt let those bitches say shit about her. Thats takes a lot,a hell of a lot. Im sorry for your lost,may she rest in peace.
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MOONofROSES Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry to hear your loss, and that is bullying, sorry your school has that problem. Other things that I has seen and this was at some funerals, is that there are some cold hearted people that smile and pose for a camera shot, and then post it on darn facebook, it just makes me so mad that some young kids are not growing the right way..
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Well, all you can do for her now is pray for her, or at least keep her memory alive. And, as some here have said... try not to let the guilt eat you alive...mourn, but eventually let go. Sometimes...you might not have been able to see; you did the best you could.

Hmm... never thought I'd hear that the bullies get their due. Hope they get help if they need it( since not all bullies are just assholes.) (never though I'd hear that someone actually paid someone to beat a high schooler in real life, either, but such is the capacity of cruelty that humanity can have.)

That last bit reminds me of "Thirteen Reasons Why"...but I digress.

Hope that she has a good afterlife... and that you are able to get through this.
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oconpo0 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Sometimes... There is nothing u could do. I'm glad u did something, because life is a bitch, but if people are there 2 support u, it takes a little bit of the weight off...

Sometimes u c things, and don't think anything of it until it's 2 late...
Whatever u do, don't blame ur self otherwise it'll eat u whole!

I had a situation like this & i would continuously blame myself... I almost killed myself because of it...

So don't blame ur self, u did as much as u could! Be happy for that!
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6Star6Wolf6 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012   General Artist
very good job of standing up for something that's right! Very rare to see that these days. I'm proud of what you did. Glad they got what they had been deserving
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Metarex12 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
That's horrible. They get what they deserve. At least you did something for her even if she's gone from this world. It can be hard trying to confront someone when they're feeling down, but at least justice was served. I have my own issues with suicide, but I find it hard to discuss it with other people because it's such a touchy subject. Some people find it offensive and avoid the topic all together or others don't take it too seriously or others have tried it before, but don't like talking about it.
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TheReverendofDrugs Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well thank God they got what they deserved because I would have personally found them and dealt with it differently. How disgusting. Those slimy pathetic people, they'll be the first to get pregnant and addicted to various things, and hopefully die because poor choices. I know it's cruel to wish death on another person, but scum like that is horrible. The world would truly be a slightly better place without wastes of skin like them.

You didn't know any better. And I know that wherever your friend is now, she's smiling because you did the right thing now. Or the world is smiling ... or karma will be in your favour ... or whatever you believe in :P
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JustALittleCrayCray Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One of my best friend's brother committed suicide two weeks ago. The whole school went into mourning. Not even anybody from the middle or elementray school said anything bad about him. I'm sorry you had to deal with such jerks. :(
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ExquisitelyExplicit Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Writer
D:

(I'm sorry, but that's the only reaction I can muster right now.)
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theselect1nat0r Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Dammit why did I click on this

Fuck
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mentalcatastrophe Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
They got what they deserved! Paying people to beat and rape a girl--disgusting. May the poor girl finally rest in peace.
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RedHeadedBitch Featured By Owner May 25, 2012   Writer
Thats an absolutely terrible story =/ My heart goes out to that poor girl. You did the right thing getting those people what they had coming to them. She would be really proud/grateful to you.

What you have to remember is she'd want you to be happy. You're allowed to miss her and everything, but you can't blame yourself. She was probably happy for the times you guys spent together; but in the end it was her choice. You can't let that hang over your head
Hang in there <3 if you need anyone to talk to I'll always be here. I've been in a similar position before..
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
THank you. :)
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Auroriaz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
....God, I have no words for hearing this. I don't know what to say, whether to be angry or sad.....why would someone pay to beat someone up?? What could someone have done to make someone dislike them that much..she was 14! I feel like there is no reason to live on this planet, and that humanity is seriously...everyone is fucked up. Everyone is evil and hateful....but...I try not to think thoughts like that...I try to have a positive outlook on life....
Death is a serious thing...those people are practically murders for driving her over the edge like that. I don't know the whole story, but....I feel so enraged to read something like this. I am glad to hear they got what they deserved. They deserve to be put in jail for good, and those (pardon the terms) stupid fucking bitches should never get into any other schools, they.....I should stop here. I have said a lot.
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Auroriaz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But..on a more positive note, I would like to add that this story has reminded me of something I have tried to apply to my own life. One action (good or bad) can affect someone's life (or day), in small or large ways. I try my best to watch what I say, but also speak up when standing up for something I believe in. I used to think that nothing I did would ever affect the world in a good way, but...even though I have a lot of odds against me, I am going to keep trying, to change the world for the better, bit by bit, step by step. I won't give up. Someone I considered "wise" told me once not to offer help to others, but only help if they want it, if they come to me...this does not always work! In high school, etc. Young people don't justr ask a stranger for help..if I know I can help someone, even in a small way, I will try to offer my advice to them, or something. Even a friendly "Hello" can affect someone's day. I know if people said "Hello" to me more often, that would help me!
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
:) I like this rule. I think everyone should apply it to their lives.
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Auroriaz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I often forget to apply things (such as this rule of mine) to my life each day, I instead try to get through the day instead of seeing that I should not waste my life, I should enjoy it, and instead of avoiding people, challenge myself more often to do things I usually cannot do. I don't like getting up in the morning and wishing for the end of the day to arrive so soon. Time goes by too fast it seems...
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
It can't be helped, we're only human. :)
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
No, it's okay, go on. I've said the same things in a court room, and I have much worse thoughts about those people everyday, it takes every muscle in my body not to go kill them. So knowing someone knows EXACTLY how I feel makes me feel really reassured. :)
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Auroriaz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I often think such things too, especially when angry or upset at the world...but, I know it is not our planet's fault..it is the people that inhabit it. I cannot "label" everyone as a bad person, I just get so worked up reading something like this..
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
I know, same here, but it's a shame, they don't know how that feels, and they won't learn from their mistakes. ALl they'll learn is not to get caught, and someelse will get hurt again.
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Auroriaz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I often wonder...what events could have happened in one's live to turn them down the "wrong path". People aren't just born "evil"...something must have happended to them..unfortunately...instead of changing, learning, etc. they don't....instead of being a person who could change the world, they are the opposite...well, they are changing the world, but for the worst...:(
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
I think most of the time, they're thinking about revenge.
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FoREVerSpACEd Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's terrible how people would mock someone after their death. I'm glad you and your friends stood up for her. I'm so sorry for your loss :hug: :(
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
I'll be okay, and I'm sure she went to heaven anyway. :) She's happy now.
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FoREVerSpACEd Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup. I'm sure she did. She's in the hands of God now.
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist
'And he's singing her her favorite lullaby'
Sorry, her grandma said that at her funeral and it reminded me of it.
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FoREVerSpACEd Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's perfectly fine. :hug:
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LoserDork Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist
:huggle:
:manhug:
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FoREVerSpACEd Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha :hug: :heart:
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